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Tuesday 3 June 2014

swimming writing.

Did you know that Michael Phelps made a comeback after not competing for the last 2 years. He has already won 22 Olympic medals, and is known as the world’s best swimmer.
He took part in a meet in Arizona where he was barely beaten by Lochte in his favourite event 100m butterfly.He is so famous for his big body parts. Michael Phelps last swam was at the 2012 London Olympics.He doesn't know if he will come back and lead in the 2016 Rio Olympics.

1 comment:

  1. Good job Siu. I like the way you went back and recrafted both the meaning and the details - well done!
    Mrs Nua

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